T. E. Lawrence Correspondence – Page 311
T. E. Lawrence Correspondence
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To H.Williams...(...) 18.3.30-21.3.30
You seem to be able to pen a good phrase in simple words
almost as and when you please. I ran back to that Bunyan there,
for he got to the end of his P.P. without throwing in the
p.c. The sun-flickers on the toppling wave
p.28. The winter; very very good it is. An epitome of
Salisbury Plain.
p.39. That journey to the coast.
p.40. Wiggling, shiny......
p.59. Light run and trembled
p.68. Little-things wavered
p.69. Dimming night.....does it dim? I hesitated for two
moments here.
p.64. Mere ghost of ...wader
P.73."in a vacuum..."
p.86 .The nailed boots bit
p.88. a flittering butterfly of light
p.104. dilated by every ruddy crash
p.116. gangrenous light of dawn
P.117. The broken skull is beautifully observed
p.125. ribbed serjeants corpses....but isn't this almost
too technical a picture?
p.129. The picture & metaphor of Ypres is superb.
P.159. Tuckering the water...superb; it didn't need the
toad's back, really.
p.169. his ".trembling body was now large and alone.
p.164.pooiets of their minds growingtowards ".
If some unkind power forbade me to take interest in that
little list I could make a second and a third list of
delights. Camaradeship like yours warms one, to meet.
I begin/ to suspect that you may be one of those com-
paratively rare authors who write best about people or
things other than themselves. I hope so, because it is
the sort that lasts longest, unless (you are, deleted:
one is a very deep man, like Dostoevsky, and can keep
on digging down into (yourself, deleted: oneself. I
hope you aren't that, because it means misery for the
artist, and the two roads, happiness & misery, seem to be
equally within our choice, as, & there comes a more common sense
to be happy.
Tarka and this P.P. are better than your novels, I think,
I think, because you get further outside the horrific
convolutions of your brain/ in each. The objective, as
somebody (what properly may, which is the classic rather
than the romantic manner.
I have enjoyed the P.P. very much. The Hut
say that it isn't properly named, it being not a
bind" like that Bunyan chap's stuff. "Bind" is ....
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